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            The 10 Laws for Writing Letters that Get Results 
            
            Dear 
            Readers,  
            
             
            Let me tell you how to write letters that get read and get results. 
            That's a tall order! Well, here's what I think the "laws" are:
             
            
              
            
            1. 
            Know what's in it for your reader.
             
            
            Get 
            out of your ego and into your reader's ego. Complete this sentence: 
            "Get my book so that you can...(fill in the blank)." Your book (or 
            whatever you are selling) is the feature. What people get as a 
            result of having your book is the benefit. Focus on benefits. 
            Always! Without this, your letter will bomb.
             
            
            2. 
            Write a headline that telegraphs the key benefit to your reader.
             
            
            ALWAYS 
            use a headline. There is only ONE exception to this rule. When you 
            personalize your letter, the "Dear (whoever)" opening becomes your 
            headline. There are few headlines more powerful than the reader's 
            own name. The headline is THE most important part of your letter! 
            Spend nearly all of your time on it.  
            
            3. Be 
            brief.  
            
            Say 
            what you have to say in terms of the reader's self interest and shut 
            up. This does NOT necessarily mean a short letter. If you are trying 
            to make a sale, and the reader has never heard of you or your item 
            for sell, you may have to write four or more pages to get your 
            message across. If all you want is a return call, a one page letter 
            may do. Don' be afraid of length. People will read any length of 
            copy AS LONG AS ITS INTERESTING. 
            
            4. 
            Always use a PS.  
            
            
            Always. Why do copywriters who charge upwards to $15,000 to write a 
            sales letter and have weeks to draft it always use a PS? They are 
            always read. Always.  
            
            5. 
            Look good.  
            
            Visual 
            attractiveness accounts for 70% of your letter's impact. Use short 
            sentences, short paragraphs, bulleted points, indented paragraphs, 
            subheads, etc. Some people will just skim your letter, so engaging 
            subheads and bulleted points help reach them instantly.
             
            
            6. 
            Outline first. 
            
            Use a 
            planning tool such as the program Project KickStart to help you 
            think through your message. Or talk to a friend. Or to a tape 
            recorder. Or to yourself. This also helps you get comfortable with 
            speaking your letter rather than writing it.
             
            
            7. 
            Write first, edit last.  
            
            Turn 
            your inner editor off. You can rewrite later. For now, write 
            spontaneously and quickly to get your ideas on paper.
             
            
            8. Ask 
            for something.  
            
            Why 
            are you writing? You want a call. Or an order. Something. Say so!
             
            
            9. Get 
            a reader.  
            
            Find 
            one person to read your letter OUT LOUD in front of you. If he (or 
            she) has trouble reading your letter, if he wrinkles his brow or 
            stops to re-read a sentence, rewrite those places. Don't skip this 
            step! It's the secret of many professional writers.
             
            
            10. 
            Rewrite your letter again.  
            
            Is it 
            the best you can do? Be honest! If not, throw it away and call the 
            person instead. Or hire a copywriter to write it for you. Why waste 
            your time or your reader's with something that doesn't communicate 
            in a persuasive and interesting way?  
            
            Well, 
            there you have it. Of course, there are more rules, laws, ideas and 
            suggestions for writing letters that get results. You should always 
            guarantee whatever you are selling, for example, and always offer 
            proof for all of your claims. But the above will get you rolling. 
            
             
            Sincerely,  
            
            Joe Vitale 
            
            Hypnotic Writing 
            (Identify yourself. People look here to see who the letter is from.)
             
            
            PS -- 
            Notice that you read this PS?  
            
            PPS -- 
            Notice that you read this one, too? 
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